医药论文英文摘要中的常见错误与评改

  1、医药科技工作者撰写医药论文时一般要求附英文摘要，英文摘要写得准确与
否，很大程度上体现了作者的学术水平，也与论文的影响力有很大关系。我们有幸
从《医药导报》杂志社获取了相当数量论文的英文摘要原稿。该刊特邀英文校译—
—同华中科技大学同济医学院冯新为教授，年逾九旬仍伏案笔耕，为这些稿件做了
大量细致深入的校译工作，可谓句句汗水字字珠玑。给医药科技论文英文摘要的写
作提供了一个范本，对广大医药科技工作者来说也是一次极其珍贵的学习机会。本
刊特辑录刊载其原文及冯教授所作修正、点评，以飨读者。
   2、编制体例：本文按照原文、修正、点评次序编写；修改、插入处以黑体斜体
，删节处附括号说明，如有点评附上标数字注明。

1、 原文：
Determination of Gallic Acid in Zhixueting Liquids by TLC Scanning
ZHOU Qun1, XU La-ying2 (1. Department of Pharmacology, Tongji Medical C
ollege, Huazhong University of Science and Technology, Wuhan 430030, Ch
ina; 2.The Faculty of Pharmacy, Hubei College of Traditional Chinese Me
dicine, Wuhan 430061,China)
ABSTRACT Objective: To determine the content of gallic acid in Zhixueti
ng liquids. Methods: Zhixueting liquids were dissolved by distilled wat
er, and then extracted into the sample with butanal etc. The samples we
re determinated by TLC scanning (λS=280nm,λR=350nm). Result: The aver
age recovery rate was 96.36% and RSD=2.39%. The contents of gallic acid
 in 3 five batches of samples were 0.38,0.42 and 0.47mg/ml. Conclusion:
 The method is simple, convenient and available.
KEY WORDS TLC Scanning; Zhixueting liquids; Determination; Gallic acid
修正：
Determination of Gallic Acid in Chuxueting1 oral Liquids by TLC Scannin
g
ZHOU Qun1, XU La-ying2 (1. School of Pharmacy2, Tongji Medical College,
 Huazhong University of Science and Technology, Wuhan 430030, China; 2.
The Faculty of Pharmacy, Hubei College of Traditional Chinese Medicine,
 Wuhan 430061,China)
Abstract Objective: To determine the content of gallic acid in Chuxueti
ng oral Liquids. Methods: The Chuxueting oral Liquid was dissolved in d
istilled water, and then extracted （into the sample删去） with water-s
aturaled n-butanol3 etc. for the preparation of samples. The samples we
re subjected to gallic acid determination by TLC scanning (λS=280nm,λ
R=350nm). Results: The average rate of recovery was 96.36%,（and删去） 
RSD=2.39%. The contents of gallic acid in 3 （five删去） batches of sam
ples were 0.38,0.42 and 0.47mg/ml respectively. Conclusion: The method 
is simple, convenient and feasible.
KEY WORDS TLC Scanning; Chuxueting oral Liquids; Determination; Gallic 
acid
点评：
1、zhixueting 应为“止血停”而非“出血停”，自相矛盾。“出血停”也可译为
hemorrhage-stopping，以方便国外读者理解。
2、school可作“（大学里的）院”解，原意是“药学院”，而非“药理教研室”
，故改之。
3、斜体n表示“正”。

2、原文：
Content Determination of Emodin in Qingre Mingmu Capsules
LUO Ming-zhu1, ZHANG Hong2 (1.Hubei Provice Institute of Drug Control, 
Wuhan 430030, China; 2.The 75310 Medical Team of the Army)
ABSTRACT Objectives: To determination content of Emodin in Qingre Mingm
u Capsules. Methods: Tlcs was used, silica gel Tlc plate, developing so
lvent was Benzene-Ethyl fermate-formic acid-Methanol-water(3:1:0.05:0.1
:0.5) of which the upper solutionλS=435nm,λR=530nm. Result: The linea
r relationship of sample application which ranged between 0.168-3.09μg
 was good. The regression equation was below: Y=105417.7X-1115.6, r=0.9
995; arerage recovery was 
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