学生英语范文点评六

【习作要求】
　　Miss Jo Hunt和Lily是好朋友。Lily给Jo写信，告诉她自己和双胞胎妹妹在中国学习和生活的情况，并询问对方的汉语学习情况及是否能来中国。

　　要求：写一篇100词左右的信。

　　【学生习作】

March 5th，2004

Dear Jo:
　　How are you? I haven’t heard of ① you for a long time.

　　I’d like tell ② you something about our school life in China. Now we are students of No.4 Middle School. We’re in the same grade, Grade Two, but in different class ③. I’m in Class 1, but Lucy is in Class 4. We go to school five days a week. Every morning, we leave home after a quick breakfast. Classes begin at eight o’clock in the morning. We have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon. We have lunch at school because we all ④ like Chinese food very much.

　　Our favorite food is dumplings. School is over at about 3 in the afternoon. After school we have sports on the playground. We have made friends with a lot of Chinese children. We teach them English and they teach our ⑤ Chinese. Now we can speak and write a little in Chinese. What about you? By the way, when are you coming to China? Please write to me soon.

Love from: Lily

①from，“收到某人的信”应为hear from。

②to tell，正确的说法是“would like sb. to do sth.”

③classes，既然在不同班级，应该用复数形式。

④both，all表示三者以上的人或物，both表示二者。

⑤us，此处应用宾格形式。
　　【名师点评】
　　本文从句子结构到语言能力的表达都很不错。思路清晰，行文流畅。正确地运用了动词时态，但是大小写及动词搭配还要多加练习。

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